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The Spell - Chapter 2 & 3 Note to the Reader: The following snippets are rough draft chapters of my current WIP MG fiction novel CAUGHT IN THE ACT: THE S
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Missing luggage is always a great polot point that is underutilized.
i agree with quanta - at this early stage of the novel, the characters are not yet all connected to one another, which is great for the reader, as it leaves them (me) guessing :) also i assume her brother was part of the bad things that happened in chapter 1, but it's still hazy enough for me to be in guessing-mode.